Week 2 Story: The Consequence of the Great Turtle
Long ago, as time was being created, there lived the Great Turtle. This evil being hungered for the souls of the young, and committed many atrocities in order to satisfy that wicked desire. Eventually, the Council of Creatures of the land and sea knew that is was time to end the reign of the Great Turtle. The Council mounted an attack against the Turtle, and an epic battle raged nearly an eternity. This battle of tragedy, heroism, suffering, and bravery ended at just the same time as the new eternity
was rising. I will not go into the details of this battle here, for it is not the purpose of this tale. However, I will tell you that many Creatures, such as the Mighty Unicorn, lost their lives to end the Great Turtle's reign (that is how we lost many Great Creatures who are now known only in legends). As the new eternity was beginning, the Council of Creatures had to decide how best to punish this most evil being. The Council knew that they could not kill the Great Turtle, as this would (as you well know) also be the end of all turtles, even those that did not share in their master's wickedness. It was decided that the Great Turtle would be imprisoned on Earth, doomed to roam as a being of dependent on both land and sea. He was also stripped of his title,
becoming simply the Turtle. The Council of Creatures trapped the Turtle in a small pool and shoreline, and did their best to keep all lesser creatures away for fear that the Turtle would somehow regain his power. As the millennia passed, however, many of Creatures became complacent and forgot the wickedness of the once-great Turtle. Eventually, a city of men developed near the Turtle's region, and eventually a naive king of men made this small pool into a vast lake, thus unwittingly increasing the Turtle's power and expanding his domain. The villainous Turtle wasted no time in utilizing his growing strength, and made attempts to consume the young boys who played in and near the lake. He nearly succeeded in consuming their souls, but one of the boys recognized the Turtle as a demon (although not technically correct, it was the closest the boy could come to putting a name to his instinctual fear). The Turtle was captured by grown men, whom he was not yet strong enough to
Author's Note:
I chose to create the backstory of How the Turtle Saved His Own Life because I thought it would be interesting to legitimize the fears of the princes and king. The original story was one of misunderstanding, with no true villain to be found. However, in my story I wanted to show that the instinct to fear the turtle as a demon was not mislead, but actually accurate. I also thought it would be fun to introduce the "Council of Creatures" storyline, and may want to incorporate that thread in more of my stories.
Bibliography:
The Turtle and The King by Ellen C. Babbitt
Images:
The Great Turtle
The Mighty Unicorn
The Cosmos
I enjoyed your creative spin on this story, Jessica! It was neat to read your vision of the backstory and how that could have looked like. If you ask me, your backstory sounds extremely convincing and could be the real deal backstory! I especially enjoyed how you explained the reason why unicorns have died and the creation of the "Council of Creatures." Incorporating the "Council of Creatures" in future stories is a great idea and maybe you could even expand it and explain who makes up the Council and how it came to be!
ReplyDeleteI thought your interpretation of the story was really good. I liked the backstory and world building in your story. It also was not just a retelling of the original but an expansion. I thought the council of creatures and the battle and plight of the turtle added a lot to the original story. It would be interesting to see some of the characters appear in other stories.
ReplyDeleteWow, I really enjoyed your story. It was a great rendition of the story and I liked the changes you made.
ReplyDeleteI wonder if the turtle will come back to devour the souls of the ones he couldn't before.
What if the turtle was initially form space, you mentioned he wouldn't be bound by land or sea later, but what if that is because that turtle is initially from space.